Best of Model Society Video Test

Version 1 is the original. Version 2 is shorter. I cut out 26 seconds. Removed the section that said, "The revelation of awe you'll experience within these pages shines in two directions, as it brightens the world around you and illuminates the beauty of your own hidden heart." I like that line, but it was the only "fluff" I felt I could remove. What do you think?